Dead End?

It seems we have hit a stand still with our film opening. It looks too much like a music video which is partly due to the bell ringing in time with the music and also due to the running of the music the whole way through. We have had several ideas such as stopping the music part way through for Elisha to look at the time and continue without any music, we also had the idea of abandoning the bike and for Elisha to continue on foot. The final idea we had was to have footsteps follow Elisha on the last shot. Other than these ideas we are quite stuck on where to go from here, hopefully we'll think of something and soon.