Film Drafts

We haven't uploaded a second draft of our film opening yet and a lot has changed since our last upload:



This is our second draft and a lot has changed in between each draft such as adding a bell that is synchronous to the backing music. We then decided to cut this as it made the opening look too much like a music video.



We also have made several changes to the ordering of shots, as well as this we have changed the types of shots we have used, which therefore creating a more layered and bulked up film opening. We have also made adjustments to the sound as in the first draft non-digetic music is used with the diegtic sound of the bike going through leaves ect. We have still got the non-digetic music but cut the sounds of the bike, although this reduces the verisimilitude of the opening, it gives the audience the impression that the girl is completely blocked out from her surroundings.